Thursday, December 07, 2006

Writing Project Reflection
This project was basically 2things:
  • In-depth study/research of the ethics perspectives listed in our textbook, "Ethics. . ."
  • collaboration of a small group
Because of prior experience of working in a small group where 3 of the 7 of us in this group were, [my words] "lazy-butts", I wasn't enthused about working within a group. This group of 4 [including myself] was a completely different experience: we were all cooperative with each other, we contributed, I believe, evenly and we all seemed to enjoy each other's company, though very brief.
For me, I must hold-off all preconceived notions of how a group will or won't work.
Also, I'm rather intrigued by the study of ethics; however, I hesitate on enrolling in a 16-week course on campus because of the time of studying/researching/ analyzing this sort of course would probably entail.

This will be the last blog/post of my ENG111 homework.
Everyone take care & stay safe!!!

Tuesday, December 05, 2006

Reflection on Question #3 of pgs. 148-149 [of our Ethics textbook]

A technical communicator/writer has, in my mind, a limit on unknown quantity of as how much responsibility he/she has for a technical document to be read and fully understood by the audience involved.
I don't believe the writer's ethical responsibility lays with only the original message. I personally would follow-up within a reasonable time-frame, to make certain the document I developed, sent and/or delivered. Once I received a response from my document's audience,I'd send another communique asking the original document's audience if that message was read and fully understood. I ensure, as best as I can, the importance of that message, and of course, make copies of what I sent and received. This is called, I believe, 'c. y. b.'[ "cover your butt"]
After all that, then the ethical "burden" lies in the reader's lap. I did all I could possibly do to get my audience to read and understand the document I was presenting them.

Sunday, December 03, 2006

For the HP #3--
PELINKS4U Technology in Physical Education Student-directed vs. Teacher-directed Technologies From http://www.pelinks4u.org/archives/technology/020106.htm on Oct. 22, 2006
Only a tiny bit useful info here.
Grammar Work--
I had completed one of the exercised about "dangling modifiers". I scored 85%--3 wrong out of a total of 20. Pretty good! I beginning to believe that I'm better in English, mechanics-wise, than I previously thought!
My thoughts of our "Ethics" textbook, chapter 5; "Challenger Disaster: Information versus Meaning"--
The federal investigations about the 'why' of the Challenger tragedy nearly 2 decades ago, showed how vital technical communications needs to have clarity as well as how the society at-large shapes or forms communications of all kinds.
And then, there was the comments and interpretations of those 2 investigations reports!
Values, whether they be of a technical nature or philosophical one, are the foundation of of all technical communications. Either technical documents carry out ethic responsiblity of the technical writer or they don't.
Its very interesting to me, that in this chapter, Mr. Dombrowski actually refers to himself, in the 1st person (pages 122 & 123).
Why did Volumes II through V of the Presential investigation report [to be known as the Rogers Commission report, in the blog--RCr] contain only appendices of Volume I? From what Mr. Dombrowski has written on the RCr, there was very little genuine factual information the shuttle's explosion: very weak in the relevancy department! I understand that what was discovered was "pumped up" in its proportion--what was minor was given prominence.
I feel the need to create a poster from the following quote, from Mr. Dombrowski:
"A careful writer should select from the wealth of data available, highlighting things that are most important and downplaying if not excluding things that are relatively unimportant; this is what the reader expects of the writer, too."
I love that statement and I personally want to live/write in that manner, of course, only in my academic and future work-related writing.
Good grief! On page 126, under the sub-heading of "Cofusing Language", Mr. D. [as I will refer to him, from now on. in this blog] cites 3 examples {actually one page within the Volume V of RCr} of this crazy document! This writing makes me wonder: were the writers on some hallucingenic substance? It seems no one could figure which direction to go, so it went everywhere.
I'm pleasently surprised by how Mr. D. used a personal example in his life, of the difference between personal procedural decision-making.
The Congressional report of the investigation seemed to have better clarity than the RCr and it was quite alot less vague.
At about the beginning of the section entitled, "Two Crucial Shifts in Meaning", I realized I had not really paid much attention to the news media analyses of this whole event, especially regardingthe explanation of those now-infamous O-rings. Until I read this particular chapter in our Ehtics textbook, I didn't give that specific tragedy much thought!
Why didn't any one question thre generalized belief that "what went up" and "what came down"were one and the same? These O-rings were charred; not all the way through, but enough to ask, "why only the one O-ring? " as well as "what is the cause of the charring?"
Technical writers communicate not only data and facts, but additionally, what those facts mean. This makes sense to me.
'Social forces', such as economic boundaries, design simplicity, parts availability, and others I'm sure, are real and important thus they all influence both the technical writer and the audience involved. In this specific case, whether these influnces were proper or/and excusable isn't the point, but rather these 'forces' changes the writers involved, unbeknownst to these writers.
Regarding that last meeting of the managers and engineers, before the actual launch, they had decided to ignore/disregard those who were in direct contact with those O-rings and other equipment. Note to self: always have a commonsensical and independent mind!
About the audience any technical document is aimed toward: always side toward a degree of pessimism,meaning don't expect all audiences to be reasonable.
In conclusion, {finally she is nearly done!!}, there are so many lessons to learned, sadly though, from other's mistakes.

Friday, December 01, 2006

Guidelines for using PowerPoint--

K. Murray (Sept. 16, 2002) "10 Tips for Creating Effective Presentations using PowerPoint" From
http://www.microsoft.com/office/previous/xp/columns/column08.asp
retrieved on Nov. 28, 2006
Excellent bunch of tips as well as some things CIS105 didn't teach me!!

V. Montecino (copyright date of July, 1999) Creating An Effective PowerPoint Presentation From
http://mason.gmu.edu/~montecin/powerpoint.htm retrieved on Nov. 29, 2006
A former university teacher, Ms. Montecino knows her "stuff". This page is succinct and to-the-point [parden the pun--LOL]
"Web links" under "Writing", through mycomplab--
I had chosen:
A) Paradigm Online Writing Assistant, in the category of "Prewriting"

B) Nuts and Bolts of College Writing, in the category of "Writing Process"

C) Outlining from Capital Community College, in the category of Planning

D) Opening Paragraphs from Bowling Green Writing Lab in the category of "Drafting"

E) Revision in the Writing Process from ERICDigest, in the category of "Revising" [of course]

and finally, F) Computer and proofreading from Bowling Green Writing Lab in the category of Finalizing
Regard the ethical situation in our text, "Ethics. . .", question #1, on pages 115-116--

I made comments on the following classmates "blogs":
Elizabeth's
http://wwwtoshi.blogspot.com/2006_10_01_wwwtoshi_archive.html

Mirelle's
http://rustybloggy.blogspot.com

Monica's
http://drfaustus8.blogspot.com/2006_10_01_drfaustus8_archive.html--


All in all, I feel that we, Eng 111 students, are pretty ethically-minded.